schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Keep up the wonderful work. Can\'t wait to see more!
schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, the fic isn\'t bad, quite good actuallyth sth some plot thrown in...I do hate reading just smut.
But just one question...
Ginny and Hermione aren\'t in the same year, so how could Ginny be in the same dorm as Hermione? Maybe you want to clear that up in the next chapter...
~C Lily~
But just one question...
Ginny and Hermione aren\'t in the same year, so how could Ginny be in the same dorm as Hermione? Maybe you want to clear that up in the next chapter...
~C Lily~
schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Please continue! I can\'t wait to read when they *actually* do it! *grins wickedly*
schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! My only complaint is there is not enough. Please write longer or very, very often. You also might want to warn readers about the language although in my exposure to boarding school teenagers, it is very accurate. Ron\'s comment was perfect. Good job.
schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh hurry and write more!
Email me when the next chapter is up, please.
Email me when the next chapter is up, please.
schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that sentece that Harry gave was brilliant! Hahahahaahaha!
Like the plot!! Very good fic indeed! If it\'s your first then i mcomgcomgratulate you, very talented.
Besos
Like the plot!! Very good fic indeed! If it\'s your first then i mcomgcomgratulate you, very talented.
Besos
schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG... Hermione... naughty! Update soon... PLEASE?!??!?!!?!? I want to read more!! *s! *smiles sheepishly*
schedule
August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love D/Her fan fictions please contine i hope they get together in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like thi story!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule
August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For your first fic this is good. Please continue as soon as you can and when you update please e-mail me at HPfreak18@cs.com. I love this so far can\'t wait mor more!
schedule
August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story has started out really well!! Please continue!!