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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...smutty, but hot nonetheless! Let me know when you update!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
draco is a major bastard in this story but i like the way you made him stick to his character:D the only thing i dont understand is that one minute he wants to be nice and gentle and the next he's a jackass and wants to be rough. kinda scary what he does to hermione though, lol, great job! please let hermione have a good ending no matter who she's with cuz it would be embarrassing beyond belief if the whole school or aybody saw those pictures. update soon!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh silly me
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great storyline and sex scenes Love Draco here! Update soon, please!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I like your story A LOT!!!!
And I like the way Draco is VERY charming one day and then the next day he is a dirty son of a bitch. -But he is still hot!!!!
Keep writing, please...
And I like the way Draco is VERY charming one day and then the next day he is a dirty son of a bitch. -But he is still hot!!!!
Keep writing, please...
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so hot, please write more!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You evil author you! I LOVE YOU! Good job!
Kudos to you.
Kudos to you.
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool, please write more! This is great! Can\'t wait to read on! Mail me when you update, could you? Thankies!
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i told ya i was gonna read BOTH versions!!
anyway, i totally engrossed in this chapter (yes, yes, i admit, i am SUCH a lil\' kinky, perverted girl!!) the only part that kinda disgusted me was when goyle & crabbe had their little \"one-on-one\" w/ hermione. i mean, can you imagine those two idotic and god damned FUGLY retards having their way w/ hermione? ewwwww - nastiness. i guess it makes the story even more, er, raunchy.
i wonder what\'s gonna happen next.. keep up w/ the great work nat! can\'t wait until the NEXT chapter is out!! =]
anyway, i totally engrossed in this chapter (yes, yes, i admit, i am SUCH a lil\' kinky, perverted girl!!) the only part that kinda disgusted me was when goyle & crabbe had their little \"one-on-one\" w/ hermione. i mean, can you imagine those two idotic and god damned FUGLY retards having their way w/ hermione? ewwwww - nastiness. i guess it makes the story even more, er, raunchy.
i wonder what\'s gonna happen next.. keep up w/ the great work nat! can\'t wait until the NEXT chapter is out!! =]
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The first seven chrs wrs were amazing. But, why did Draco express further desire for the girl after letting both his \"under endowed\" goons have her as \"seconds?\" Draco\'s character has aristocratic arrogance that makes his entire being. He was working hard to seduce her with his skills. How could she enjoy those cretins without any skill at all? That was just ewww. I really don\'t mean this to sound like flaming. I thought maybe you would want to know that I appreciated your carefully crafted Draco and thought he should have made a much different impression on the girl\'s libido than his untalented goons.