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person stefrand
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your piece. It was well thought out, and quite well wri. Y. Your characters are solid, and the details are fascinating. I actually enjoy the evil!Severus stories very much.....one can take only so much sappy sweetness, after all. Yours is one of the best I\'ve read in a long time. If you decide to expand this fic, I\'ll definitely be one of the readers!
person Rilla
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is extremely well-written. I usually don\'t like evil Snape, but I loved this one! It reminded me a bit of one of my favorite books of all time, \'The Handmaid\'s Tale\' by Margaret Atwood. Ooh, this story gave me chills. Great job!
person Pearle
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very well written. This could stand alone, but with such an intriguing beginning, I would hope you will continue. While I am all for the light to win, there is something to be said for the dark! Great characterizations, I tend to think Snape will react this way, whoever wins. Please continue.