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person Anon
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Sea
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scary stuff..how horrible to have one\'s memories taken against one\'s will. I like the way you have written the character of Snape - never sure if he is evil or good. Looking forward to reading more!
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awomse PLEASE continue u on with this sooooooon!
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Snape is evil and naughty as always, and this mysterious Madeleine is writ better than I\'ve seen in a while - not quite the wide-eyed virgin, not quite the shameless harlot (heehee, harlot. I love that word!). Yes. I like it. But there is one thing that I can never get enough of - porn! C\'mon girl! This is a naughty, naughty forum! Be more sexplicit! Pleeeeease? Hey, it hath already been proven that you can write ungodly well - now spread that talent (and someone\'s legs?)!

- \'Da Kitten
person nesscafe
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
COOL!!! I can\'t wait for the expansion on this story! I thought it was great and I have no doubt that you will do a fabulous job w/ it! Write on!
person Derr
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Has definite potenial.
person Laerai
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wherever this plot bunny came from, I like it! I love the way you leisurely and prettbtlybtly let the reader figure out the true identity of the characters. eemseems that it could develop into more. If you continue, or leave it be, I still loved it!
person Little Miss Cant Be Wrong
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Please, please, please turn this into a \"full\" story, your such a talanted writer that I want to know w you you will go with this.
person Lucky
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Hermione! I would definitely write more because it is too good not to. I would love to see Hermione (Flame/Ginny as well) find out everything. She is clever and has access to truth serums. She would eventually figure something out. Great job!
person EVegvary
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is phenomenally well written and stylishly presented. *clapping* I certainly understand your dilemma of being forced to write something like this...methinks, I can summon acuracurate picture of your own master/muse...hahaha. It does work as a wonderful and extremely chilling stand-alone, but I will continue to check in to see if your, erm, muse forces your hand back to the keyboard for more of this unsettling tale.

Be well.