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for A Midsummer\'s Journey

by shelia

person Odesa
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t decide if thats bittersweet or just happy. It was a lovely story really. Sorry it seems the more I take the less I remember.
person Draco_Fan
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It would have been nice to read some Lemon!!!! hehe... I had to go translate that last thing you had up...Seigneur, que ces mortels sont fous... because I had no idea what it meant. I\'ve never read the book or seen the movie, \"A Midsummer nigts dream\"... though I want to... Update soon!
person aprilgrey
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m delighted with this story and just want to thank you so much, yet ag for for writing it. I am eagerly anticipating your next update! Hugs, April
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Andrian,

Oh dear, I spoke too soonis iis is more beautiful than I have imagined! The writing pleases this writers\' palate with its delicious prose and luscious imagery. Again the scenes of strong winds and heavy rainfall are vividly written. They add a touch of drama to the text. Hermione\'s feelings are so real, the tears and the sadness I feel a lump in my throat when I read the memories of her pass by. I cannot wait to find the denouement of the story. Do update soon.

Sincerely,

SantiMonreal
person Corazon
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Andrian,

You are so truly correct in saying this
love story can stand alone without the
smut. It is simply beautiful.

Remus shedding a tear in front of
Hermione was so sensual. Bravo!


Hugs,
Corazon
person Odessa
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was very good. i\'ve read all of your storie posted here and i\'ve enjoyed every one of them but this is definately my favorite.
person Saudamini
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god..that was beautiful...such a refreshing change from all the smut loaded fics out there. I\'m really happy for Remus...that was such a beautiful stor...update soon!!
person Draco_Fan
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! They didn\'t sleep together yet... I hope they do soon! And Remus loves Hermione!!!! YES! I just hope she feels the same way. And I can\'t believe that girl turned him down... and she said that she loved him... BITCH! Update soon!
person GrrArrg
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good god woman, you update fast!! not that I\'m complaining!!

This story is getting sweeter by the minute.

Those two are just so cute.

More soon please

GrrArrg
person Lizzy
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep going with this! It\'s really well written, and i love RL/HG! Love it!