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by petrasthuk

person Anon
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person moe
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON, i hope snape and hermione do hook up eventually though!!!
person Lyndie578
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Severus better be just around the corner? Dame Korun, you just had to have him seek revenge on her. Well, at least it better push her into Severus\' waiting arms!
person Excel
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job on this story. I\'m completely hooked already and the \'relationship\' Hermione and Severus have started in nicely done. Update soon.^^
person Talene
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A sad tale and very involved. I think that Hermoine will have more than a few problems recovering.....things that remain hidden and come out subtlely. I say that because I have suffered many losses in my life including that of my 15 month old son. Sometimes self-destructive paths are not obvious. Not eating can be obvious. But what of sleep? The body produces a po tha that causes the the body to seek sleep in order to rest and repair. Little or no sleep can cause your body to build up larger and larger amounts of the poison. Eventually it will kill you. It will affect the heart and breathing. Something to think on. It was not dreams I was avoiding.....I\'m not quite sure why I did it. I know I was depressed as hell. At some point death becomes something no longer to be feared but rather a companion that seems to walk with you through life.....neither good nor evil. Sounds weird I am sure. E-mail me sometime if you want the whole of the story. My reasons for viewing things as I do. I will answer gladly. Take care. Great story!!
person kuky
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice! please update soon!! It was well- written!
person Potions Mistress
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right; that is a great movie. But i love your story more!! It is greater!!! I just love the way you interact them, and it almost makes it sound believable. I mean, as my friends would say, nothing to do with Snape and Hermione together sounds believable, but i think Severus and Hermione are a good match. I really like this story and i can\'t wait until you update again.
person Potions Mistress
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter. You really describe emotionally distraught people well. Update soon!
person beautifullyMalicious
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lord. Just four chapters in and I\'m completely hooked. You have an exquisite writing style. Please, let me know when you update. Thanks.
person Rilla
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I absolutely love reading different takes on the last battle and this one is great. The scenes of Snape staying by Hermione\'s side are really heart wrenching. Well done! I look forward to reading more.