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OMGOMGOMG! (snicker snicker giggle snort) you-are-fantastic-omigosh-I-am-absolutely-jealous-of-your-wit-and-capabilities-you-gave-me-a-fricking-girl-boner-and-I-thought-I-was-mentally-climaxing-for-a-second-or-two(big inhalation of air)though-I-must-admit-your-way-of-killing-Alan-shipe-I-mean-Snape-was-quite-inappropriate-though-everything-else-was-just-\"Marvelous, darling.Marvelous!\"(second big inhalation)BTW-shipe-is-plural-in-my-family-for-sheep-but-it-makes-interesting-swears-let-alone-sweaters-(It\'s really late, I just finished reading what you have written so far,really, hyper, @ a friends house, and I\'m very pun-friendly)(snicker snicker giggle snort)(big exhalation, then inhalation)NOOOOOO-SEVERUS SNAPE MUST NOT DIE AND HERMY AND SEV AND THE OTHER COUPLES LIKE GIN AND HAIR MUST HAVE LOTS O\' CHILDREN DAMMIT! SORRY, I DON\"T SWEAR TOO MUCH IN WRITING BUT I MEAN IT...YEAH< I WAS GONNA DO IT AGAIN< BUT I\'D HAVE TO COME UP WITH A NEW EXCUSE OR 5 BAGILLION (note to self: stop pressing the durn shift key, makes me look like I\'m deaf or sommmat)

OMGOMGOMG! (snicker snicker giggle snort) you-are-fantc-omc-omigosh-I-am-absolutely-jealous-of-your-wit-and-capabilities-you-gave-me-a-fricking-girl-boner-and-I-thought-I-was-mentally-climaxing-for-a-second-or-two(big inhalation of air)though-I-must-admit-your-way-of-killing-Alan-shipe-I-mean-Snape-was-quite-inappropriate-though-everything-else-was-just-\"Marvelous, darling.Marvelous!\"(second big inhalation)BTW-shipe-is-plural-in-my-family-for-sheep-but-it-makes-interesting-swears-let-alone-sweaters-(It\'s really late, I just finished reading what you have written so far,really, hyper, @ a friends house, and I\'m very pun-friendly)(snicker snicker giggle snort)(big exhalation, then inhalation)NOOOOOOERUSERUS SNAPE MUST NOT DIE AND HERMY AND SEV AND THE OTHER COUPLES LIKE GIN AND HAIR MUST HAVE LOTS O\' CHILDREN DAMMIT! SORRY, I DON\"T SWEAR TOO MUCH IN WRITING BUT I MEAN IT...YEAH< I WAS GONNA DO IT AGAIN< BUT I\'D HAVE TO COME UP WITH A NEW EXCUSE OR 5 BAGILLION (note to self: stop pressing the durn shift key, makes me look like I\'m deaf or sommmat)

So sorry wasn\'t quite finished and accidentally sent the same review twice. Well now I\'m an idiot...what else is new? (cultured self taking over....there are a lot of people in her head, believe you me!!!(what does this mean?)) Oh yes, darling, love, ab fab, and all, though I do believe they had buttons since they are easier to conceal than huge floppy dic-shipe-I mean-DRAWSTRINGS!!!!!(looks around at people staring, then \"snicker snicker giggle snort chortle chuckle hee hee hee\"(also had 4 servings of ice cream that was to die for GRANDESSA VERY CHERRY CHOCOLATe CHIP....YUM!)) as in your question about them in the sex scene...mmm yes quite delight-full. Purrrrrrrrfect. Please continue A!! P!! PLEASE!!! For the sake of humanity and all that is well and good(especially ice cream) you MUST continue. thank you for your time.Good night. Off to drool at Adrian Brody porn-Shipe!I keep doing this!-MODELING PHOTOS, YES MODELING PHOTOS!!!(snicker snicker giggle snort)

excellent story!! i am no longer subscribed to wiktt, so when you next update, please email me! i cannot wait to find out what happens to severus, and everything else. i hope he lives, obviously and that malfoy dies, and that hermione nd severus\'s marriage works out. cannot wait for more!

Hrmmmm ..... I always respect any story that is researched extensively, and writ as ungodly well as yours, but I have to say it was a total suprise to find such an \'adult\' fanfic here in Smutville - and even more of a suprise that I enjoyed it! VERYVERYVERY well done! You ought to post this in more places - if the sex is a problem, leave it out - the story is good enough all by itself. Masterfully done!

- \'Da Kitten

PS: Peeves is sick enough as is, but fucking a HOUSE ELF? Now that\ust ust this side of beastiality. Ew.

What an evil cliffhanger at the end. Will anxiously await the next chapter.

Also, noticed that you have been posting this on FFnet and will be adding this to my favorites list!

You put a wonderous amount of research inour our stories. Should you ever publish an original story please send me an email so that I may be the first in line at the bookstore.

Wow that was brilliant. I find myself enthralled and dare I say even liking this type of genre. You have written this excellently.

I actually read this last weeen yen you posted it, but didn\'t get a chance to review. So I wanted to make sure I came back to tell what a wonderful job you are doing with this story. I am anxiously waiting to see how he resolves his problems with Malfoy and Hermione.

ok most definetly liked tchapchapter but i reall y want to read hermiones and snapes first night together hopefully shell have a kid and snape will ease up a little. Dont worrie your not sounding to scholary but i really think the feminism suits hermione and probably gives her that spunk that completely turns snape on. Well thats all the positive critisism i can give ya now, but i really like it so keep up the good work and dont keep us waiting to long for the next chapters.

~Cherie ;D

Ooh, that\'s probably the best chapter yet. As much as I was looking forward to the grand romantic reunion, this was better. A disappointing consummating of marriage, an even worse slip of the tongue by Severus, and a temperamental Hermione - it was fan fantastic. And so now Severus will duel Lucius, dear oh dear...