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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How utterly delightful! I read more Regency romances than is probably healthy, but I have to say you\'ve made the HP characters fit into the world better than those in the novels I actually pay for ;) I\'m quite impressed.
Please do continue your story. I\'m having fun guessing where the rest of the characters will end up!
Please do continue your story. I\'m having fun guessing where the rest of the characters will end up!
schedule
July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You did a wonderful job with the language, and Snape seems to fit perfectly into this type of story. The comments about Harry being his son were hilarious too. Please write more!
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know whether I have ever reviewed any of your stories so far, and if I haven\'t, you have my deepest apologies, for I have read and greatly enjoyed every single story that you have yet written and posted in the SS/HG genre, anyways. They are detailed, cover the entire array of human emotion, show that you have a more than decent grasp of the english language (no offense to non-native English speakers, just sick of those who are ves ves to the language and yet can\'t seem to form a decent sentence), and are posted in an incredibly timely manner; do you finish the entire story and then post the chapters? I really enjoy what you have of this so far, and followed the dissusion on WIKTT with great interest, having never heard of Regency novels, although I stayed in lurkdom, as i generally do at all times, even after reading a story, but I figured that I had let your wonderful stories go without having told you that I liked them long enough. Um, if you don\'t mind, I was rather confused about a few terms that you used: light skirt, for one..mm, can\'t find any others although i thought there were some, which means that you skillfully put them in context so that I could eventually figure it out. I really like how you have crafted this plotline s far, and Im hoping that, like all of your stories so far, this one ends with a happy ending (i;m sucha sucker); the cruelty that you have between them is interesting, I like how you exped ted the situation through Malfoy, and the way that you wove Harry and Ginny into it is really interesting. I sense Harry\'s accent being sort of difficult to write, though, it isnt always coming across clearly in my head as I read this...sorry, just a bit of criticism. Wonderful job, and I do hope that you dont plan on abandoning this:)