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person rabbit
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh! what fun this fic is great and you are right in saying that the first chapter really doesn\'t do the fic
justice. very interesting making half the town magical. quite tastey. and yes I am evil o so EVIL!
person rabbit
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you asked for me to review every chapter so well here i am along with some constructive criticism, of course,
the entire quidditch team knows the truth about shall we say harry\'s problem? and you forgot our dear old Snape.
person rabbit
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i tell you, love it. you have me hanging on to every word. please... update... soon... make... rabbit... verry-verry-verry happy *run around screaming and pulling out hair* need next chapter! humpf! i hate cliffhangers.
person Kimbra-fire
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story from the beginning to now, but I can\'t help but ask if Luthur will come back. I kinda thought that he would have been the vampire and not Alex. But I like how the plot is going though, keep up the good work! =^-^=
person Ja\'Nice
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yummy!
person rabbit
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
tisk tisk your spellis wos wonderful! very interesting all seems well but your crazed fans need more chapters
wahahahaha!!! sorry i\'m in a very evil mood