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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I love this story, I hope you update soon.
More Power to the Multi!Harry storyline :-)
More Power to the Multi!Harry storyline :-)
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Remus knows Muggle Defence?! That is so cool! And I agree with Remus about Sirius and cooking. In this other story I read, Sirius burnt the bacon and there was a grease fire. He put water onto it to put it out, but her just made it bigger!!!!! LOL In the end, it was Harry who put the fire out, it was hilarious b/c in the story Harry was a 10-11 year old I think. Love your story!!!!
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting name you chose. I can finally understand why ff writers want reviews so badly. Please poeple R&R I need to know how good or bad I am at this betaing stuff. Oh, I\'m not opposed to Harry having several different lovers but I think that he should at some point becoming H/D. Or you could put Draco with a Clone.
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I\'m hooked! I came oss oss this today and read it in one sitting.
I love the storyline and the introduction of all the new \"peoples\". I think Harry
is well written, and love all the plot twists. As for who Harry should be paired with,
I see your Harry as a pretty confident character who would be completely comfortable
having several lovers of different races. Only my opiniooughough. Pls update soon,
or I will go into withdrawl!
I love the storyline and the introduction of all the new \"peoples\". I think Harry
is well written, and love all the plot twists. As for who Harry should be paired with,
I see your Harry as a pretty confident character who would be completely comfortable
having several lovers of different races. Only my opiniooughough. Pls update soon,
or I will go into withdrawl!
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is really decent, but I would like to suggest that you seek out a beta to help with your sentences, misspellings and misuse of some words. I, personally, find it throws me off when I read only because I\'ve been a secretary for so many years (and had an english major for a mother!). While I like reading what you\'ve written, I find myself mentally correcting you mistakes. Forgive me if it sounds harsh--it\'s not meant to be anything more than constructive and I do hope that you\'ll continue writing.
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this so far. I\'m a Harry/Draco fanatic, so I\'d love it if you got them together... update soon, please!
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m guessing that Luthor won\'t be in the story in the near future. So I think that Harry would be pretty good together with Alex and not Draco since there\'s been too many stories pairing him with Harry. But if Ron is in on what Dumbledore is trying to do to Harry, wouldn\'t Hermione be in on it too? Or maybe not since she is a muggleborn. I liked the part when Harry and the Dursleys captured Devon, and it goes to show that the Dursleys aren\'t bastards to Harry in every story that they\'re in! LOL
=^-^= Keep up the good work!
=^-^= Keep up the good work!
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ahhh and so the plot thickens. i am starting to get confused about who all these people are. and no that is wrong just wrong you should never never NEVER like c. over all the story is just peachy
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter this one cleared up some of my many questions and i think that i finally figured out who everyone was, by the way were was Gemini last chapter. you want a war you have one all we need is some \"friendly\rms.rms. Muhahahaha
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s cool that rabbit is your beta-reader. I don\'t think that I could do editing that well. But there\'s still something that\'s peculiar about the OotP and Voldemort. Why would Dumbledore go through all that trouble to have Devon work for him from America instea hav having someone else from the Order do it instead. Gah, this is too much for me! Lol, =^-^= But this chappie was funny though.