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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well we all know the fahter is whoever panics the most, haha. wonder who it is tho? *cough*severus*cough*. writes more soon!!! pls?!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCK\'N GOD WHAT THE HELL!!
IT IS A GOOD STORY BUT WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO HARRY?
AND SNAPE?? WHY???? OF ALL THE PEOPLE WHY SNAPE?? (I FIGURED IT OUT!)
NOW DRACO HAS ALL THESE ISSUSE WITH HIS FATHER AND DEALING WITH WHAT\'S GOING ON AT SCHOOL.
COLLIN IS A VERY COOOL KID I THINK HE AND DRACO SHOULD GET TOGETHER WHEN HE (COLLIN) CHANGES HOUSES.
NOW RON IS BEING AN ASS AND SHOULD BE PUNISHED FOR DOING THAT TO DENNIS.
PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!!
I\'D LIKE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO EVERYONE
EASEEASE KEEP WRITING
LADYVAMP ^_^
IT IS A GOOD STORY BUT WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO HARRY?
AND SNAPE?? WHY???? OF ALL THE PEOPLE WHY SNAPE?? (I FIGURED IT OUT!)
NOW DRACO HAS ALL THESE ISSUSE WITH HIS FATHER AND DEALING WITH WHAT\'S GOING ON AT SCHOOL.
COLLIN IS A VERY COOOL KID I THINK HE AND DRACO SHOULD GET TOGETHER WHEN HE (COLLIN) CHANGES HOUSES.
NOW RON IS BEING AN ASS AND SHOULD BE PUNISHED FOR DOING THAT TO DENNIS.
PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!!
I\'D LIKE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO EVERYONE
EASEEASE KEEP WRITING
LADYVAMP ^_^
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love kitten Colin and the way you\'re portraying the Malfoys, but I think that the deal with Harry and his lover (my guess is Snape) has no place in this story
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You repeated the latter end of chapter 6 and you really need a beta reader but the story is fine and don\'t let anyone (like that fool in the reviews for \'De-aging Draco\') tell you that it is bad. Personally I think it\'s a good thing you\'re writing an uncommon pairing such as Collin/Draco, keep going with it.
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Its a great start. A lot of potential. You do have some minor typos and grammer problems that would be solved by a beta reader if you don\'t already have one. Oh, and there iprobproblem with Chapter 6, Seems to repeat. You may want to reedit that.
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was mean. You didn\'t tell us who Harry\'s with but you gave several clues hinting that whoever it is a Slytherin so I have a pretty good idea. Till then I\'ll be anxiously waiting to see if I\'m right on my guess.
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this looks good. Draco seems to be sensible about the situation - or at least he can see the personal advantage to being passably nice to Colin. Like he said to Crabb & Goyle, if Colin gets harmed in his care it reflects badly on him & Snape.
I do wonder however if Colin\'s opinion of Draco will alter.
Carry on with this fic, it looks good.
I do wonder however if Colin\'s opinion of Draco will alter.
Carry on with this fic, it looks good.
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful idea! Please continue soon I can\'t wait to read more.