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for Parvulus Cattus

by cathankitten

person Melanie
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please finish it!
person Leticia
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, this story is wonderful!!! Were it not for those effecients. I am Czech and even I recognize them. Altought the plot is really good.

Wow, the Creeveys are Severus\'? And I tought it was Lucius who\'s responsible for all misteries in your story.....

I\'m so anxious about(?) another chapter. I\'ve just read it all at once!
person ziona2000
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well.... Hhhhmmmm? uh, UH, un. HHHhhhmmm...? well OK.

White cats? speaking necklaces? Creevy brother and some weird connection....Boys having babies? and Twins? SNAPE????!!!!???

It like not being able to stop yourself from watching a horrible, twisted, bodies everywhere car accident.

So its not really a bad review it\'s just - ODD.
person SG
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
luvs it cant wait til da next chapter!!
person verdant quest
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Just one problem: you really need to spellcheck and reread before posting. It\'s always more enjoyable to read a story, if you don\'t have to decipwhatwhat the author meant. Keep cracking; this one has potential!
person Arelina
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story its so original pls pls update soon!!!!!
person Sierra Ruffner
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! And i can\'t wait to see the next chapter! Must have more!
person gothel
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry it took me so long to review you. been busy her here it is.. you need to write more. this is my favorite story of yours and i really want to read more on it as soon as possible.... meaning now! ^_^. hurry, hurry, hurry.:P anyway, get another chapter out and ill be sure to review it.
person SebenaGodess
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*huggles cute lil colin kittie* me likes the story so far. wonder wots distracting draco. oh well guess ill find out on to chapter 3!
\\ \\/ / much luvs,
(^_^) SG
person SG
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story but i think you should get a beta. definitely. lotsa mistakes.