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for Wicked Little Secrets

by Gin

person suzanne
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL!!!
person Lana Manckir
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was so cool! LOL! I was jumping in my seat in anticipation if they would get caught or not. Great work! Gotta love Snape!
person TONI
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Girl you just get better and better! this one was also great keep it up.
person Fervesco
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was steamy! I\'m very impressed. Naughty, naughty, Severus and Hermione. I so wished they\'d get caught - next time maybe? Keep up the great work :)
person Lizski
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice! I love the twist on an old theme - and I really liked how you built up the tension, alternating between Hermione/Severus and the faculty coming down to see them. Very well written!
person Corazon
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I liked this story. The use of the
Veritiserum was wonderful! Especially
that SS was already with HG. I didn\'t
expect that. I assumed he was going
to make her confess her love for the
first time, but I liked how you wrote it!

Hugs,
Corazon
person Lenea
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why are there dots are splattered throughout this wonder piece of literature? :(

I loved this ficlet, you know that. I don\'t know about adding on to this particular piece, though. It would be better left as a stand alone, in my opinion. That doesn\'t mean you have to stop writing S/Hr smut, though. And why WOULD you?

Wouldn\'t it be nice if I could come up with something better to say?
person cher
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very naughty!! i can\'t wait for more!!
person Ana Liddrel
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love the way u write!!!it reminds me of J.K.Rowling.
love the smut!!!!!!
person Avrild
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, I just read this a second time and I think it\'s wonderful. Thank you very much and welcome to AFF.net. I try to avoid ff.net, so I know what you mean.;)