rate_review Reviews

Read about six chapters and must honestly confess that I much prefer \"The Last Potion\" with your Snape who seems more in control of his
feelings and doesn\'t capitulate so easily to a woman\'s charms let alone the notion of \"love.\" I get the impression that he is constantly
stumbling over this beautiful perfect woman with repressed lust induced drool. Snape isn\'t much of a snarky challenge here - what was
it he said in OotP: \'Fools who wear their hearts proudly on their sleeves, who cannot control their emotions\' and all that jazz.
You have my rapted attention with TLP, and I shall avidly continue to follow that storyline. :)

I have really really really have been enjoying this story. It\'s time frame is interesting as we know what else is going on in the school. Can\'t wait for more !!

Glinda

I just read chapters 6 and 7. Jessica is a very
interesting woman. Her past is fascinating. And
for Snape to ask permission to court her goes
to show just how proper and gentleman like
he can be.

The date was wonderful. I loved that she
persuaded him to dance with her.

I will continue reading this when I get the
dishes washed. *cringe*

Hugs,
Corazon

RickyRoo,
I am really enjoying this story. I am
very curious about Jessica\'s secrets. The
kisses her and Severus have shared
are amazing.

Keep up the excellent writing!

Hugs,
Corazon