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for Outside the Fire

by moonglow

person Estrilda
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay -terrific story - although way not long - update, update, update, Please???
person YellowFairie
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!

Oh... SO cute. lalalalala


Loved it!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Y WIY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
person OzRatbag2
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful rollercoaster of emotions, with a delightfully witty exchange of dialogue and banter between the main characters. I love the T-Shirts, the idea of the \'bond\' rings and the general warmth of the whole story.

I\'d love to see another interlude of Salsa dancing. The Christmas moment, whilst charged with a great many unspoken emotions, was too short. I\'d love to see the pair of them really dance, not just dabble.

I\'ve just read the extant chrs irs in one go and that\'s a rare feat for me. A story has to engage me to get that sort of pulling power.

I\'m so glad Susanna/pigwidgeon37 mentioned this story at her LJ. I might have missed this treat otherwise.

I\'m looking forward to your updates and watching the story weave its way towards its conclusion.

person Estrilda
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful story. The anticipation is wonderful - although too much anticipation will not be appreciated - hint hint. The humour is wonderful - when are we going to find out about Draco\'s other little sayings? The character development is wonderful. Crookshanks is a wonderful part of your story as well. As one of the world\'s most devoted \"cat persons,\" I thank you for his expanded character and part in the plot. He will be helping Hr. find reasons to search for him in the dungeons, right? I have also really liked your take on Draco. Oh heck - I like all of your characters, even those that are just portraits. Please, please update soon.
person Juno
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay! an update. I\'ve got to say this is one of my top ten fics of all time. It\'s got great ships, and Draco and Harry are soo cute! Now I\'m just picturing them with sparkly anime eyes like in the \"Klamp School Detectives\" (Worst anime ever, lots of pretty little boys who are prettier then the girls, plots, but no plot) anyway, love the plotting, want to know the t-shirt logos, wish I had one like hermione\'s cuz that would be funny. :) And hope things progress nicely from here, of course with any Hr/SS Ship it\'s always 2 step forward, 2 steps back (and they\'re cha cha ing) Hope school work doesn\'t get you down!
person Estrilda
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. I love your sense of humor. I makes this fic stand out in the crowd. Please update soon!
person jezebel
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is so good...i want more updates please! i know you might not have time but puhhhllleeaaseee write more...and soon!! its just that good...kinda like strawberries and whipped cream on harry and draco......mmmmmmmm
person Princess Tori of Azkaban
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Please update soon. I love this fic. Whats Hermione and Severus going to do??? *winks suggestivly* any wrte more. Loving it. Bye.
person J.P.
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!! All 9chps were excellent!!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens!!!!!!
person Eldemar
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! absolutely brilliant. it took you a while to update and i was dpoinpointed, because this story is a special favorite of mine!
Please update soon.
*kisses*
~Eldemar