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for Outside the Fire

by moonglow

person Anon
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic.

Just wondering have you given up on it, because i have been checking for updates for a few weeks, and there hasnt been any.

If you have finished this fic and its on a diffrent site could you please let me know?

You could post it on Wiktt.

Thanx.
M.

person moony_reader
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh I loved this! It was absolutely fabulous! What a perfect combination of humor, friendship, love and sex. I especially loved this scenes with Draco and Harry. Your portrayl of their relationswas was so much better than a lot that I\'ve read. Most of them involve so much drama and pain, it was really nice that for once Draco and Harry seemed innocently happy with their entire lives ahead of them. And I thought I was a stroke of geneou hav have Snape resign from Hogwarts, thus making it pretty much risk-free for him to get together with Hermione (if he was fired it wouldn\'t really matter would it).

And lastly, I loved how you stayed true to Hermione\'s character and made her a strong woman. Hexing Harry and punching Corner werfinifinitely things that Rowling\'s Hermione would do. I loved that she stood up for herself and I also loved that this was a lot different than most Hermione/Snape fics in that, Hemione wasn\'t this submissive, virginal school girl and Snape wasn\'t this controlling bastard who got off on her age. You definitely helped to give their relationship integrity when you had Snape meet Hermione\'s father. Excellent work in every way! Please keep writing stories on this site.
person YellowFairie
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! FINALLY! It\'s about freaking time they got it on like snow monkies trying to keep warm!

Loved that chapter!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT!!!!!!!
person Susan
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and am so glad you updated! But I have to agree with another reviewer: I have no idea what Michael Corner said to Snape to make him(and everyone else) so upset. Just a little thing really....the most recent chapter is wonderful! Update soon.
Susan
person meg
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::claps and cheers:: woo hoo!! an update! I\'m so happy!! Anyway, this was a gerat chapter!! It was so hot!! Very nice plan at the dance by the way, Ginnys so cool!! The Harry Draco thing was bloody hilarious! Youre doing a eally nice job mate, keep it up and write more!!!!
person Blackrose
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Hope Harry doesn\'t get too many probs. I\'m getting confused though. Maybe you can help me. I\'ve read upto chapter eight but I\'m really confused as to what Corner could\'ve called Severus to insult him so badly. Could you please clear this up for me. Hope to see more.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Read chapters 10 & 11..... WHO cursed Harry? I know that Harry & Draco\'s timing was bad, but at least they had a good reason!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!! Deb >^..^<
person HERMIONEANDSEVERUS4EVA!
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story, luv it evil cliffie!!! only found a few errors typos etc minor really. ur story\'s going great kudos 2 u :) im begging u, plz email me when u update (and thank u) longer review later (like when maybe u post another chappie ;) *sigh, a pathetic attempt to blackmail an author is no good....too bad*
person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh
My
God
This fic is too funny and would ya stop with the cliffhangers?! I\'m about to have a seizure at the end of every chapter bec I e I enjoy it too much to be left hanging. Please, if you would, alert me when you update. Thanks.
person Temptation
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know how much I am finding this. I wonder who else is going to be cursed? Is revenge truly sweet? Keep the chapters coming. Do you have an update list I could be added to?