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for Outside the Fire

by moonglow

person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. really loved it all the tension (sp?) anyway please update soon.
person Meg
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOU UPDATED!! I\'m so excited! Please keep writing more and more chapters, I can\'t wait to see what happens next!! Please update again real soon!!!!!!!!
person unperfectwolf
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. just as good the next time around. and of course, leaves me wanting more just as much :).
person bloodsugar
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the first time i read your fic, stumbled upon it really while randomly going through this site, looking for anything hermione-related. i enjoyed reading your story, it\'s very well-written. it\'s actually a very refreshing change from a lot of the fics i\'ve read, and i can see you really put a lot of care into crafting each chapter. please do update soon! :)
person silver
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t get it...what did corner say?? I mean all i got was that he said that snape was the last item....
enlighten me please!!
person Ann
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Found your story by accident. But I enjoyed it very much!! I hope you update soon, because I am curious to see what all of the Gryf/Slyth couples are up to!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this at Whispers. I am so glad that you have been updating the story here. I really, really hope you finish this story! I love your writing! ^_^
person Meg
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe I liked the ending to that chapter, I can\'t wait for the next ones, I love how long they are its so great!!! Anyway, gives me more of an excuse not to study for finals, and for that I thank you ever so deeply. lol. please keep it up, I love this fic, as it was like, the third HP fic i\'ve ever read, and by now, I\'ve tread a TON. Stil love this one more though. I can\'t wait for the update!!
person revel_in_me
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So very pleased to see your writing again,
Thanks for a great chapter. I can\'t help but love the characters you create.
-Cheers :)
person Bambu
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I\'ve missed several of your updates, and this has built beautifully. It\'s got humor and pathos and everything in between. That he threw out his back is just hysterical!