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for Home is Where the Heart Is

by Lynne

person mollyanne
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
its fantastic, and when severus bought the robes, your style is not very used
person NymphadoraTonksLupin
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was cute...even though I\'m a MAJOR Tonks/Lupin shipper, this seemed the most realistic adaptation to the couple. Although I was kinda wanting a bit of Lupin/Snape for a while there...lol

anyway, i like it!

~Sarah aka Nymphadora Tonks-Lupin
person EVegvary
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes! You are doing a superb job on this! Not one misstep yet - and I love the way you have Lupin\'s personality being slowly revealed. Poor Tonks! But the werewolf is even harder to pair up then our Potions-Master, I think.

Keep going, keep going!
person ladyfeylene
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Two more chapters to read through, and I\'m beat! Ah...so Remus and Tonks off together...I *wonder* what could possibly happen... ;-)
person EVegvary
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*clapping, clapping, clapping*

This is really incredibly well written. You have a superb ear for dialogue and a deft hand with Lupin\'s emotions. What\'s most impressive though, is your ability to keep Snape completely AND humourously in character! Bravo! I myself love the werewolf very much and would be pleased to see him happy, cuz he is such a happy and deep guy. I will closely follow your updates.

Be well.
person theladyfeylene
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, second chapter just as good as the first. Highly enjoying this story. Good characterization, solid plot, certainly enough to keep me involved. Looking forward to the next chapter!
person AEMorgan
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very interesting beginning. and vivid too - can picture it all in my head. can\'t wait for more
person theladyfeylene
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this. Looking forward to more. If you\'re doing updatertserts at all, please include me!