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by Annie0282

person aphrodite
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It\'s soooooo great to see a Ron/Hermione story here! You made my day! :)
person Odessa
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is really cute. Keep writing. It\'s just a little implossible that Ron and Hermione have owls. Well Ron would still have Pig, and I think that if Hermione was a Shakespeare lover, which wouldn\'t surprise me, she wouldn\'t name her owl Romeo b/c that particular play is not considered among the best of Shakespeare\'s. She probably pick something like Hamlet or Orlando. but then its also possible thaTthat I\'m full of crap.
person Care Bare
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good for a fist time fic! Tight, consistent, and creative...now, just check your grammar a little and you\'ll be all set! I like the R/H ness. I believe that many people on this site will be against that, but don\'t let that hinder your work! I, myself, am a huge R/H shipper and wouldn\'t mind seeing some more action form them! Looking forward to your next chapter,

re Bre Bare*
person deedee
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely continue the story. It\'s really cute:) I could totally see this happening between them. Write more.