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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you\'re going to write a fanfiction please be sure to proofread your story before posting or at least have it beta\'d. The plot sounds interesting, but the verb tenses you use are all wrong and the sentences are very poorly written. I highly suggest you comb through this story and rewrite it more professionally.
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really loving this story. I keep checking every day to see if you\'ve added to it. Can\'t wait for more, and more, and more.... Thank you so much for writing this.
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August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So now that we know about the past, what is going to happen in the present (and the future)? More HG/SS goodness, I hope!
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August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More more more please !!!!
Can\'t wait to see how she deals with adult Snape ^_^
Glinda
ps - thanks for all of your reviews !!!
Can\'t wait to see how she deals with adult Snape ^_^
Glinda
ps - thanks for all of your reviews !!!
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love what you did at the end. Obliviate! Can\'t wait for the next chapter
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it. You make me wonder what will happen next.
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When do we get chapter 9?
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story! What happens when Hermione returns and sees Snape in her time? Update soon! I can\'t wait to find out what happens.
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good chapter, excellent job I can\'t wait for more!! Now with the adult Snape!
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When\'s the next chapter?