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for Dangerous efforts.

by Vierveijzer

person hermioneSNAPEfan1983
schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
she never told young snape her last name so thats how young snape knew her last name because it wasnt young snape but the old snape glamourd as young snape!!!

also what WAS her answer?? Oh my sweet Merlin! This was even better than the first time we made love.
person hermioneSNAPEfan1983
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so thats why snape doesnt remeber anything from back in her time?!! hehehe oh no they forgot to do the contraception spell or take a potion of it?? will hermione become pregnant by snape??? also hope there is MORE to this story?? RIGHT??
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person WriterLady1031
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, I really do. But I had to stop reading at chapter 2-- the grammar, syntax, and spelling errors all over the place were driving me crazy. You have strange verb tenses and fractured sentences appearing in more than one paragraph. Please, please, PLEASE read over your work BEFORE you post it! Read it slowly out loud first, then get a beta-reader to look at it.
person Snapesangel
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lovely looking forward to your next fics ;)
person kath
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a really unique and well written story. Love the smut too;)
The ending was a bit confusing though? If Snape transformed into his younger self was he the one hanging upsidedown again? and if so what did he do with his younger version?
Just small overlooks in an otherwise wonderful story though.
Keep writing look forward to reading your new fic.
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the twist at the end !!! He did it himself, yeah baby !!

Thanks for sharing it.

Glinda

ps - new chapter will be up for \'Snape\'s Obsession\' either today or tomorrow, just wanted to let you know.
person happy
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, liked it Maddy, great plot. Loved the reviews.
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schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! Is there going to be a sequal? If so, I can\'t wait to read it.
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A lovely story. I wish I could have gone back myself.....*blushes* Please continue?