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for A War Mages Path

by AngelShinigami

person lee marker
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much it is a grate ideal.

Up date this soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kaledra Mitan
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to know if this fic has been abandoned?
person chriswiz
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I am enjoying your story. Can\'t wait for more. Using a beta would be nice. Even though the human brain can read what isn\'t there, it can give you a headache making the adjustments.
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the story so far!!!!!!!!!!!:D Nice plot:) Just to point out a small mistake there was someone you called Basil Zambini. Did you mean Blaise Zabini?

Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please *puppy dog eyes*
You have a few spelling mistakes but seeing as how you write this early in the morning that makes sense:)
I find the concept of Harry being a Mage just wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There needs to be more Harry as a Mage stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to see where this story is going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know what? It is hard to keep track of proper spelling in the early hours of the mng. ng. I\'m so tired th\'m \'m not sure if I spelled where right, though I think I did!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

from Muahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A TIRED AND VERY ODD BOUNCYNESS:D
person Yve
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK...OK, I\'M ADDICTED...More more more please

Now to something constructive.
As much as I love this plot line. The story needs to be fleshed out a little more. You\'re going from scene to scene without really fulfilling the reader\'s needs. So that the characters seems to be hopping around without enough explanation of what they are thinking and feeling that is motivating their actions.
person Julia
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to updat? its the last day of st. st. tomorrow is september 1st ill be leaveing for hogwarts in a day
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update soon because I really love A War Mages Path.
person Alex Potter
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thats a relly cool story how long will it be till you do the next chapter?
person April
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update soon please. Not much holds me still but your story did and can\'t wait for another chapter. Please!!!!!!!!!!!