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for Dark Coil

by gotsnape

person RickyRoo
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dude! You\'ve been spelling Hermione wrong!!! Tut tut!

He he... you know I\'m just teasin\'... although you did goof up her name a bit. :)
person Zee
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see this posted here. This is such a fabulous fic and one of the most well-written ones I have ever seen.

Am looking forward to more!
person RickyRoo
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, fancy seeing your fic about the pages of adultfan. I\'ve posted a few things myself in the last few days.

This is well done by the way. I\'ve always liked the prospect of venturing into Snape\'s re-entry to the Wizarding world.

See ya!

Lara
person Belladonna
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Very good job, intriguing plot, and well fleshed characters. Do continue!
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
madam, i bow at your feet, chanting \'i\'m not worthy!\' in my most sincere tone. i am totally and utterly blown away by what i\'ve just read. your imagery and flow have me captivated, and i am at a loss to express how unworthy i now feel. i should run to the corner, hiding behind the pieces of tripe i call my stories after this jaunt through the lanes of your very capable imagination. the tha that madam shark wishes you to read what i\'ve written, with massive amounts of her help, and posted here and with your group, fills me with shame after this. i am truly not worthy, and it is a pity more people cannot see the beauty of severus snape as he was meant to be. a mean, darkly brooding bastard.....dead sexy, but mean and nasty.

please forgive me for stepping of plf place and daring to hope that i am a writer. you clearly have much more talent and grace with the written word thacan can ever begin to master. please allow me to occasionally kiss the hem of your robes as you pass me by.......

thank you for sharing this beautiful vision with us mere mortals. i look forward to more

yours with my best reguards,
ladydeathfaerie
person nothing2sweet
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i am so enjoying this. especially how she teases him despite their past. please tell me there will be more. soon
michelle