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for Dark Coil

by gotsnape

person Sineed
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I discovered your wonderful story a few days ago, and have been obsessively reading it ever since, til I reached the end of chapter 42. You\'ve got a good plot here, and I like how you\'re keeping Snape good and snarky. Though I\'m wondering: are you going to introduce some OoP stuff in here? Like some of the characters, or 12 Grimmauld Place, f\'r instance?
Good work, though. I don\'t think Olivia\'s Mary-Sueish at all.
person Dannie
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh yeah.. you have to update soon... i love this story.. such a nice change from what i am use to. please!
person RickyRoo
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re back!!! Yahoo! I have been soooooo slow in getting another chapter out - for both Mistress of Slytherin and Dangerous Liasions. But moving and having sick computers and bratty two year olds will do that. Good to see you back!!
person RickyRoo
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dude!!!! There\'s something missing!!! Where\'s chapter 19??? I missed all the goods. No fair!!!
~Lara
person RickyRoo
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No!!! Severus must live!

This is so well done. :) I\'m taking my time because I just don\'t want it to end. He he.

Hugs!

~Lara
person Rabid Fan
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely excellent. Hooked much.
Apart from, where did chapter 19 go?
person stringybark
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Greetings.

Yours is the first fanfiction I have ever read, and it is the meter by which I measure all others. I must say, you have set the bar high and I enjoy your efforts immensely. I hope you will continue to write further episodes in the very near future. I am sorry if this is not the sort of \"review\" of your work you were after, I have never done one of those before either. I just thought I\'d let you know that your work is read and appreciated. Sometimes that is enough.

Thoughtfully,
Stringybark
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant writing! Nothing I have read in a while amazed me as much as this...and again you prove to me that the author\'s of the fan fiction network are truly brilliant!

-Blue Ribbon
person michelle
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i am really enjoying this. it came highly recommended (by zee - kisses!) and now i want to go grab my little brothers harry potter books and read them again. i really like the interplay between them. olivia is so funny and snape is so... whatever snape is, but i like him too. cant wait to read more.
michelle
person RickyRoo
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

A beautifully written chapter. I can feel the adrenaline building!!!

See ya!

~ Lara