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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's funny, i thought it was ss/hg all along, who was the guy she lost her virginity to?
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was most enjoyable!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhh!! I thought it was Hermione right up until the end. LOL Great story.
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravisimo!Although I must admit...you need an editor. I was fairly disappointed in the end to discover it was Ginny and not Hermione. I\'m a rather big SS/HG shipper. I love your other stories as well! I have been a fan ever since I first read one on FF.net. If you are in need of an editor I am more than happy to oblige. ^_^
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story! I loved the little surprise at the end and how you portrayed a rather evil Snape. Many thanks!!!!
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. You are getting an evil streak, aren\'t you? ;-)
This was very good, and I like it being Ginny. Poor Ginny just doesn\'t get enough. ;-) And Severus being the heartless bastard is a nice change, since he\'s been romanticized a lot lately. Not that I mind a slightly romanticized Snape, because that\'s good too, but I definitely like the variety.
Apart from a few typos and grammar errors (ahem... will send you those later) one thing that was a little distracting in this last chapter was the switching of POVs. Reading both sides is nice, but you did switch POV quite frequently, and maybe could\'ve gone longer between changes.
Now that we know it was Ginny, here the big question - Where\'s the pic?? You must draw one! It wouldn\'t have to show too much, but the image of her lying in the straw on the floor of the owlry, with the owls in their perches and light streaming in from the high windows, it would be really neat.
~ Lorena :-)
This was very good, and I like it being Ginny. Poor Ginny just doesn\'t get enough. ;-) And Severus being the heartless bastard is a nice change, since he\'s been romanticized a lot lately. Not that I mind a slightly romanticized Snape, because that\'s good too, but I definitely like the variety.
Apart from a few typos and grammar errors (ahem... will send you those later) one thing that was a little distracting in this last chapter was the switching of POVs. Reading both sides is nice, but you did switch POV quite frequently, and maybe could\'ve gone longer between changes.
Now that we know it was Ginny, here the big question - Where\'s the pic?? You must draw one! It wouldn\'t have to show too much, but the image of her lying in the straw on the floor of the owlry, with the owls in their perches and light streaming in from the high windows, it would be really neat.
~ Lorena :-)
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Delicious, well-written, artful smut :) I like!
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddess, I can\'t believe it ... it\'s Ginny !!! Hell, you fooled me good .. I think I\'m reading way too much HG/SS. I was pretty sure it\'s Mione .. but Ginny that\'s also quite a rare pairing. Love that .. once again I\'m awed by your writing. *waves Andrian flag* You are one of the best HET writers out there .. please don\'t change. *bows*
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! So it was Ginny! Even though I tried to not thinkin something specifically, it caught me by surprise anyway. LOL! There\'s so many HG/SS stories outhere that even if you find one and it doesn\'y why who the gril is, you automatically think that it\'s HG.
Ginny! Yeah, nice to know it was her! for a change! lol! Hermione is getting all the action!! *CoughshintGinnyRemusSirius(anythingGinny!)hint/coughs* :D
Eagerly waiting for your next work!
Cheers!
Ginny! Yeah, nice to know it was her! for a change! lol! Hermione is getting all the action!! *CoughshintGinnyRemusSirius(anythingGinny!)hint/coughs* :D
Eagerly waiting for your next work!
Cheers!
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August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great so far! but oh no!!! i can\'t wait to out out what happens!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! you\'re my new hero! :D