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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god, why don't you write HP anymore? You were my all time favorite...
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That...was beautiful. I loved the whole concept of it. It truly was a work of art, and was one of the most beautiful things I have ever had chance to read.
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Very confusing. good story. coolsa.
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, oh just... wow...
I can\'t seem to say anything else to your pieces of writing
This story was absolutely fantastic!
can\'t wait to reare! re!
I can\'t seem to say anything else to your pieces of writing
This story was absolutely fantastic!
can\'t wait to reare! re!
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. i loved the imagery and the bitterweetness of harry in this... it was excellent, p there with classic fanftasy :) well done !
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Definitly interesting and different! :)
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, beautiful...
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oOoOoOoOoOoOoOo very prety!!!
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm...
very interesting. you have beautifully vivid disturbing imagery, used clearly and concisely. it\'s very clean; most who attempt this style clutter it up too much to make it work.
interesting theories about the tower; again, the imagery is incredible.
only one thing bothers me... the scene, where the prince is feeding the roses, is very very close to the scene in laurell k. hamilton\'s merry gentry book, \"a kiss of shadows\", where meredith is attacked by the sidhe\'s roses, and has to feed them. the imagery and wording are very close. i don\'t think you did this deliberately, or even know if you have read the book, but it is quite close, so you may want to change some of it.
other than that, absolutely excellent work.
hellfire
very interesting. you have beautifully vivid disturbing imagery, used clearly and concisely. it\'s very clean; most who attempt this style clutter it up too much to make it work.
interesting theories about the tower; again, the imagery is incredible.
only one thing bothers me... the scene, where the prince is feeding the roses, is very very close to the scene in laurell k. hamilton\'s merry gentry book, \"a kiss of shadows\", where meredith is attacked by the sidhe\'s roses, and has to feed them. the imagery and wording are very close. i don\'t think you did this deliberately, or even know if you have read the book, but it is quite close, so you may want to change some of it.
other than that, absolutely excellent work.
hellfire
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I, for one, found that eloquent, sensual and hazily dark. The wording flowed beautifully, and gave the fic an almost dreamlike quality. It *was* a peice of astheticism. There are too few fics that are pleasing to the mind for reasons other then plot and content. Writing is an art, and you understand that beautifully. :-)