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July 3, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked this one just as much as the first one. I'm off to the next one!
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude dude just no it can\'t be over. we gotta know if Snape *inner voice says that PROFESSER Snape to you* ok ok Professor Snape uses the pensive and and well... How Dumbledore reacts to the letter and and ...well I guess thats it...never ind then... i would be nice though maybe...w/e i am gonna go read another one of your fics now...*walks away mumbling about how wonderful a writer you are*
Lady X
Lady X
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very fluently and funny written. I liked the story a lot. The only thing I have to complain about is that you have way too many mistakes in the text. It can't be too much to proofread your story once or twice and then send it to a beta. Leaving your story as it is now signals that you don't want to put any effort into it other than writing. The spelling mistakes are getting fewer though. I hope you're not offended and take my comment to heart.
You wrote in the notes that the story takes place after book 5, but Hermione pesters them about the approaching OWLs.
Very melodramatic story, I really liked the somewhat clich
You wrote in the notes that the story takes place after book 5, but Hermione pesters them about the approaching OWLs.
Very melodramatic story, I really liked the somewhat clich
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i wanted to let you know i finished and i really liked your story and i cant wait till i get to read the sequel. Keep up the great work! I cant wait to see what Snape finds and thnks of in the Pensive. I also would like to know Harry\'s powers in his later years! Awesome Job!
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Gods!
Ok, I enjoy this story, yes it had sex but there was such a deep story line to it. I like how you made Neville the boy who lived and showed why it wouldn\'t work in this case. I think I was so close to crying so many times that I feel like I need to go watch a dinesy movie, or perhaps read some PWP. But thank you for writeing this fic, t hough I was a bit miffed about the ending, unless you are going to write more? I would like that. But I know how storys can be hard to contue. Well.thanks again.
-FairyChild-
Ok, I enjoy this story, yes it had sex but there was such a deep story line to it. I like how you made Neville the boy who lived and showed why it wouldn\'t work in this case. I think I was so close to crying so many times that I feel like I need to go watch a dinesy movie, or perhaps read some PWP. But thank you for writeing this fic, t hough I was a bit miffed about the ending, unless you are going to write more? I would like that. But I know how storys can be hard to contue. Well.thanks again.
-FairyChild-
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Twas was soo beautiful!!! I love it! I love it!
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Hey!! I waited and waited and waited, and I bugged you for-freakin-ever and you stop there!!! Just kidding :D, great chapter, cant wait for more, are you going to post it soon? I hope so!! this is so great!!! Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Came by to check to see if the next chapter was up and saw it was not. Is everything ok? Send me a line if you need anything. Love sto story and can\'t wait for the next chapter.
LMG
LMG
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I got the chills... wow that was freaky!! Great chapter.Thanks for the update Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
Where have you been? You don\'t even say hi anymore. ~>lc~>
Where have you been? You don\'t even say hi anymore. ~>lc~>
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I love this story, though I wish Snape wasn\'t still being a bastard, even though it was only a spirit. I hope the real Snape isn\'t like that in the rest of the story. Please keep me updated if u put any more chapters up. I\'d love to see the rest.