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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice little story.
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Generally a hard pairing to do. You\'ve kept them pretty much in character so far, and yon\'on\'t seem to be just rushing into the smut. A refreshing change. There were a couple of *tiny* grammer mistakes, but nothing glaring. :-) All in all, you\'ve got a good start here. Keep up with it.
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve seen many an excellent HG/SS PWP story. Thiadlyadly, is not among the best. It may be a hot story per se (it is! Very hot, and quite inspirational! It would do well in a sex magazine), but the characters are wildly OOC and not HG and SS at all. So why bother calling them that? Why not give them original names, and write it as a piece of original fiction?
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow daz pretty good! keep up da good work! hurry wit chapterz! *puppy eyez* :)
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was hot to the extreme. more please and soon.
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*fidgets* Where\'s the rest? *fidgets*
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
On the one hand I guess it has been done, but I say, let\'s do it again! Nice touches here, I love how she gets more turned on the meaner he is and considering his personality she seems destined for a state of heavy arousal. I\'ll definitely keep reading.