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for Separation Anxiety: A Manual

by gwendolynflight

person torgrim
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow long since abandoned but it would have been cool if you had finished it. Considering how much this mirrors Voldamorts life you could have compleated it with just one chapter, Harry killing off Lily and her new family would have left a chilling irony.
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...how intense!! I really want to see what happens next. The characterization is excellent. Very dark.
person kitsune-oni
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. i am so curious - i want to know what\'ll happen next!!
it\'s amazing. i love the interaction b/w snape and harry.
person Gem/Hermione
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. This is getting good. Keep it up mate.
person Yve
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...ok where do I start.
1) Unbelievably intense....Post chapter 7 soon...PLEASE :-)
2) I think that I like how Harry struck out into the world on his own.
3) Poor Harry...alley scene...BTW very well written.
4) Poor Sev...Kitchen scene...looks like things are just about to get interesting
5) It\'s a little hard reading and keeping track of the story because of the flash forwards.
6) The style of writting and character development is incredibly engaging.
MORE MORE MORE!
person ray
schedule January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good story
person purebloodgryffindor
schedule November 3, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Wow - this is such an intense story. I can\'t wait to see where this is headed.

PBG