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for The Elvin Bride

by gypsybaby21

schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but the story just doesn't make sense. Magic or not, something like this would be D E S T R O Y E D the instant that anyone found out it existed AND the person who made it would be executed. Hell, they might even be 'Kissed'.

No, I just don't understand this story and bottom line, period and done with: THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS A PERFECT MATCH NOR A SOULMATE! It's a load of bullshit put out there by the religious people in the world to get you to be 'happy' just boinking one person your entire life.
person Justice myers
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey . I really like this story! When are you coming out with new chapters
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG i looooove your story!!:) please please please update soon
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heya :) update update update! i love the ideas behind this fic. very cool and original.
keep it up! xx
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to finish this?
person icer666
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! Is their more?? It is way too good to stop in the middle! If it is finished someplace else could you please tell me??!! My husband recommand this story to me and I can see why! Please!!!??? --Amy
person Belle
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The storyline is incredible and I love your portrayal of both Draco and Ginny's characters is magnificent. This is essentially the best story I've read on this site, so thanks! Please continue, I would very much like to see what happens next!
Lovely work!
Bellisimo!
person Cas
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write more LoL is a cute story
person Kayy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story.

Sex scenes are pretty good.

Hermone's a horn ball...I like it haha.

Don't worry,

I've read way more screwed up sex scenes.

Just one thing though,

When Draco morphed,I got scared and thought you were gonna do beastiality.

Thnxx for not.

Please update soon!

Much Love...

XXX

Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX

P.S. nymphos rock