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for Just You

by gypsybaby21

person pamma
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! that was so good!
person pamma
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!! i love it!! great job!!
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
all the making out and stuff is pretty HOT, but the idea of peter with ANYONE sickens me because of the books and stuff. plus, i imagine him to be this snot-faced, two-timing, rolypoly-not-in-a-good-way, worsekingking-than-dudley, character. i LOVE the story, tho, and how come sirius isn\'t mg oug out with anyone? or remus?
person jess
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh...so is peter like fit and popular cos if ur using da same description from the books then eeeeeeeeewww......nxt chappie cant wait
person AnimeHimeko
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, you\'ve kept us in suspense for so long! Please continue!!!
person Jackie
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! YOU UPDATED...now all i have to say is UPDATE MORE!!! they story is going great, the characters are all well done and the plot is great! KEEP IT UP!!
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All of Lily\'s friends are having sex. When is it her turn? Oh, if you could throw Remus getting it on (very 70\'s) with someone that would be great too. I love Remus!!
Could you also have Lily call James \"Jamie\"? I really like it when he is called Jamie.
person POP
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up! I\'m dying for more
person Scumcious
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA...KEEP IT UP!
person Mya
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE! IT\"S TOO GOOD! PERFECTLY EXCELLENT