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by faeryprincess

person broken_oddity
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i\'m in love with this story!!!!!!! the plot it great, really orginial, and it\'s written so well. i can\'t wait to see what happens. it\'s not often i come across a story that i feel the need to be rude and urge for updates way too much, but come on!! i really hope you are still writing more to this. i think i will most likely cry if you aren\'t.( in which case i hope i can convince you to write more on it.) anyways, i think this one it a great big keeper! (adds to favorites)
later days, from Meagan, aka broken_oddity, aka hopeful-for-updates
person Xenocide
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a story that I always look forward to more. Very well written, can\'t wait to see how well you handle the NC-17 parts.
person Bonkerzella
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awsome story! please continue!!
person firelord
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so far update a.s.a.p.
person Jessyka
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yaya, you updated. can\'t wait for the next chapter
person Hyperbole Dragonkeeper
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So... the magic in the pendant woke Harry\'s elven herritage did it? Love the bit about the ticket stub ;)
person Hyperbole Dragonkeeper
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I had wondered given the name \'Grey Havens\' but it looks to be what I thought, they\'re in Valinor, Earth is the same world as Middle Earth but several thousand years into the future from the end of the Third Age.

The reason for my confusion over the Grey Havens is this: in the LotR books the Grey Havens was an elven stronghold established on harbour on the coast of Middle Earth west of the Shire. It was the launching point for elves headed into West (Valinor). At the end of Third Age, the last of the elves retreated to the Havens with the intention of setting out from there on the last voyage to Valinor.I reI remember that chapter rightly those who were in that last party included Galadriel, Elrond, Gandalf, presumable the last of their retainers & they were joined by Frodo who went with them. Legolas did sail with them he left in a small skiff later & presumably made it to Valinor. I have this idea that Sam Gamgee ended up sailing for the West too, him being the last of the Ringbearers.

I\'ll take it on faith that you intended some sort of location in Valinor when you refered to the Grey Havens. If you wish to gain more info on Valinor itself the best book to read is The Silmarilion.
person Hyperbole Dragonkeeper
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As wonderful as this fic is I\'m not sure how much further I could cope with reading it.
My reason?
Well betweeen how it\'s been developing & a quick look in your profile I guess that you\'re a Harry/Ginny fan. The problem is I\'m a slasher. I suffer from a het squick.
This in no way detracts from the fact that the story is great, it\'s merely a matter of my preferences.

Carry one with it, I\'ll read so long as my het squick allows.
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
add more, I can\'t wait to see what happens! great stuff.. :)
person Julia
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good new cgapter when are you going to post the next one?