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for The eyes of Winter

by shaolin

person Julili
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I so e wie with you, this world needs a fic where a girl puts Draco in place.
I like the chaer oer of Winter because she is me. Im so amezed thet she talks like me and has this great self confidence and this air about her. We do have on big thing incommon, the craving for bad boys *chuck and and i can honestly say that i also get bored quit quickly.
I will love to beta for you i really like where this story is headed and i would really like to be a part of it.
Write to me soon and tell me if you agree.


Besos
person Kristin
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it sure seems as though you have alot of anger towards other women by the way you made your character behave in front of the girls at the school. It kind of made me cringe you know? It is very Mary Sueish but I am willing to read furthur updates from you. Hope you aren\'t mad!