rate_review Reviews

That was so HOT! why does it HAVE to be the last time?! *sniff*

I give this three thumbs up.
very intertaining
not a ton of errors
not too unrealistic
sweet &
spicy

remember, ask not what you can do for the frog but what the frog can do for you

I like it! :) I think Sirius and James are veovelovely together, and it seems like you agree!

Nice. I liked that. Interesting, it\'s usually Sirius/Remus. I like that pairing. A sequel maybe...?

*That* was fucking hot. You plainly said PWP so the second reviewer obviously has nothing to complain about, and interestingly enough has no fiction of their own that they\'d share. I love how you went into the smut, it was original and hilarious. It was also incredibly sexy and I\'ve become a huge Sirius/James fan (usually go for Sirius/Lupin). Keep writing these fion, on, that was fucking incredible.

Your fic needs some work, it\'s just sex smut and not really a plot line. I don\'t mind slash, but maybe a better plotline might do it. other than that you should check over your gammar mistakes and continue with the story.

Excellent story! I\'m not a big Sirius/James fan, but I still enjoyed it! The only problem was a few common grammatical errors, you might want to read over to catch those. But that aside, you did an awesome job, good work!