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for Midnight Patrol

by Chloe0076

person Anastaja
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
We authors always hav to do that don\'t we?!?!?!...make a cliffe! Arg! Now i realize how annoying it is!!!..lol..i\'m not critisizing you..it\'s a compliment in disguise...I\'m saying i\'m mad coz you won\'t w mor more of your friggin\' awesome story!!!! You always gotta keep me guessing!!! Don\'t cha?!?!?..lol...ok..i\'ll stop be weird now...please please please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Cherry Lips
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better everytime! I hope they won
person gx-Silver
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Ron kissed Hermione and Harry was jealous. Doesn\'t get any better than that. Draco\'s gonna have a hissy fit when he finds out, right? Is this going to turn out into a Harry, Ron and Draco fighting over Hermione? Hope so. ^_^
person deedee
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This stor tur turning out to be better with each chapter. You should really have them (Draco, Ron, Harry) all fighting for her affection. It\'s always better when there\'s competition. Please write longer chapters:)
person Julili
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Getting a little aroused by reading this. More action please!
person Cherry Lips
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
F*cking in forbidden places is very erotic so hope you
person Cherry Lips
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This chapter got me all hot & sweaty! You gotta update ASAP and write longer chapters because this is so delicious! *lick lips*
person gx-Silver
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hot! I don\'t know why I like this odd pairing, but I do. t. Gt. Great scenes with Hermione and Draco sneaking around. Can\'t wait to read more. And soon!!! ^_^
person mandy
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating, it\'s getting good. Please?
thanks. Oh yeah I think this story is pretty good, so please keep adding more to it.
person Anna
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, please please please update soon!

~Anna