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by Chloe0076

person gx-Silver
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Harry, I\'m shocked! Nah, no I\'m not. Very clever way for him to be with Hermione. Hone one and Draco are gonna KILL him when the cats out of the bag. Especially Draco, being a crazy jealous boyfriend. ^_~
person cd818
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice..... I\'ll enjoy more.
person Liz
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
POTTY STINKS! HOW COULD YOU? Ugh! Must stop reading now.

D/Hr forever
person Julili
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When you think that things cant get better......Polyjuice potion, that was a great touch.
person Anna
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That is the best chapter yet, please please please update soon!


~Anna
person Liz
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant. I\'m loving this fic! I love the scene in the Library. Them touching each other while they\'re talking to Ron and Harry. I dunno where I got this idea, but do not make Hermione have sex with anyone *coughHarry/Roncough* except for the one and only \"Draco Malfoy\". I love the possesive Draco--leaving a mark for her friends to question. I can\'t wait for them to do it on Draco\'s bed..or everywhere else!
I love this line. hehe..
person Cherry Lips
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The rampant shagging is very addictive! Keep it up!
It actually takes a while before a guy gets
person Kelsey
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story was very...er...good. Lol. But it was a bit too much for me. Your a great writer though. Only some small language and grammer mistakes. Keep writing.
person Shaolin
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh....under the desk..sounds like fun....keep writing..i\'ll keep reading....
person Julili
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That end was brilliant!!! And now we have tree boys after the girl. What is going to happen? Will Hermione play with the tree of them or does her heart belong to someone special?? Look you can go where you want with these fic but it needs a plot, if it has one let me now because i may have overseen it.