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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What and where is this \"special spot\" you wrote about? Are you talking about teh Grafenberg spot or the clitoris? One is inside the vagina, oth other is not. If you mean the Grafenberg spot, Draco\'s tongue must be hella long because it is located behind the public bone on the anterior wall of the vagina. I doubt any tongue could reach that far considering when you stick out your tongue it only extends a bit over an inch...some people can extend it a bit more but I doubt they could actually lick the G spot. As for the clitoris, it\'s not inside the vagina at all. What in the hell is Draco licking, then?
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! What\'s going to happen now that Draco has seen Harry between Hermione\'s legs with his own eyes!?!?!? Please don\'t let Draco be upset with Hermione, although, I admit, I\'m kind of upset with her myself seeing that she willingly gave herself up to Harry. What drama! Please update soon! This is one of my most favorite Draco/Hermione stories of all time!!!!
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am shocked that Hermione didn\'t understand that she was raped by her best friend. When polyjuiced!Harry had sex with her the first time - that was nonconsentual sex. Hermione wouldn\'t have had sex with Harry whilst in a relationship with Draco - it would be out of character for her. And then Harry did it again the second time - premeditated rape. It didn\'t matter that Hermione wanted it later in the scene - Harry had initiated it without her consent.
I was enjoying your story until Chapter 8; now i\'m not so sure how you will be able to sort out this mess. While it is true that Hermione might forgive Harry what he did, this will undoubtedly create a gulf of mistrust against her so-called friend. If one cannot trust a friend not to take advantage of oneself, who can one trust?
I\'m curious as to what Draco would do to Harry for this to remain D/Hr - it was obvious that Hermione was unfaithful to Draco when she wasn\'t able to keep her hormones under control. Frankly, I felt that Hermione wouldn\'t have continued with Harry when Harry changed. It would have been far more realistic for your story to have her confront Harry than to allow Harry to complete the sex act, thereby making Hermione just as guilty as Harry for hurting Draco.
I was enjoying your story until Chapter 8; now i\'m not so sure how you will be able to sort out this mess. While it is true that Hermione might forgive Harry what he did, this will undoubtedly create a gulf of mistrust against her so-called friend. If one cannot trust a friend not to take advantage of oneself, who can one trust?
I\'m curious as to what Draco would do to Harry for this to remain D/Hr - it was obvious that Hermione was unfaithful to Draco when she wasn\'t able to keep her hormones under control. Frankly, I felt that Hermione wouldn\'t have continued with Harry when Harry changed. It would have been far more realistic for your story to have her confront Harry than to allow Harry to complete the sex act, thereby making Hermione just as guilty as Harry for hurting Draco.
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I wouldn\'t mind another H/Hr scene. Hope you update soon!
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This story is cool. Lots of sex... I LIKE IT! Hehe.. UPDate soon!
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter! I want to see a fight scene between Draco and Harry. And I would prefer another Harry/Hermione scene to a Ron/Hermione. ;) By the way, loved the sexual interaction between Draco and Hermione. ;)
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like the stroy so far i think you should stick it to draco and hermonie updated soon please!! =)
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I totally want Draco and Harry to beat the crap out of eachother. I would rather have another Harry and Hermione scene than a Ron and Hermione scene. Maybe Ron could try to go for Hermione, but she turns him down. I hope that helps:) Write more.