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by Chloe0076

person higapox
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think that ron should pose as hermiony an have an affair with malfoy
person Cherry Lips
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You
person Apollonia
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Short chapter but intruiging. What is Draco planning to do to Harry? I really can\'t wait to see what he has in store for him. Please continu) Ap)
person Apollonia
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Draco was quite understanding with Hermione. I didn\'t expect that. Will Draco go and kick Herry\'s ass big time? I would think the whe would since Harry is not the least apologetic for what happened. Please continue. I want to know what will happen next. ;)
person Cherry Lips
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww
person Kiki
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I likis sis story a lot! Very nice twist! Keep up the good work!
person deedee
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Harry has some nerve talking to Draco like that. After all, he did just have sex with his girlfriend. But, I\'m glad Draco didn\'t get mad at her. Or maybe he\'s too angry with Harry, and when he\'s done with Harry, he\'ll be very angry with her. Write more.
person deedee
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s about time! Just kidding:) I didn\'t think Hermione would still want to have sex with Harry, but I guess when you\'re caught up in the moment, you can\'t help youself. She should feel really guilt that she cheated, especially because she just got caught. And Harry needs a good assing from Draco, even if Draco decides to dump Hermione. If she still had sex with Harry, even when he turned back into himself, doesn\'t that mean that she wanted Harry (maybe somewhere in the back of her mind)? It just seemed that in the pervious chapters, she was loyal to Draco. She had felt so terrible about not realizing (when Harry had first disgused himself as Draco) it wasn\'t him to the point that she was crying. I was just wondering. Write more soon:)
person cd
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
if i were draco, i would brake up with hermione on the spot. she is very OOC. normally she would be much more suspicous right after the first time she discovered.
person fruity
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please please continue! This story rox!