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for The Power of Kisses

by Aefi

person Red Writing Hood
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, another perfect chapter. The lovemaking was sweet. I love the way you had Severus realize that the job wasnt worth losing her over. I cant wait to see if there is an interaction between Mortimer and Severus...I look forward to it. Oh, Im working on my update...but been working like a dog at work...will get to it soon...

RWH
person arcee
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it, you could write romance novels :<)
person Humaira
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Brilliant, keep going! Will Mortimer find out and will he care? Loved that bit with ALbus threatening him then saying, Oh Severus you washed your hair! And the muggle Magazine was just genius!
person Severus
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Keep it up, and could you read one of my stories. It\'s a Snape/Hermione one. Just look for the ID Severus.
person jessicat1982
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh! that scene with the blindfold was really hot! more of that please! and shame on hermione for making severus leave. poor snape. gah! I love it. can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Claire Bear Blondie
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Another SS/HG Story! This one is turning out great so far. I can\'t wait until the next chapter!!!!
person Zenia
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories corazon! will there be more to this?
person Glinda Trisstt
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM


OOooooh...... OK that was worth waiting for !! ~_^

Glinda
person Cherry 7-up
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GO SEVERUS! hell yeah! i didnt review for the last chapter, so i\'ll let you know now..the bride of frankenstein...genius! and the rose with the note just adorable. but this chapter was fantastic. cant wait to see what happens...hope Frogman gets whats coming to him.
person kirien
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YUM YUM, smutty-cakes!! *claps hands* I\'d like to see Sev, or better yet, Hermione turn that *cad* Mortimer into a rat. (Yes, just like Scabbers). Thanks for a *new* story, Corazon ^_ ~