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for The Power of Kisses

by Aefi

person SnarkySnape
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ello! i can\'t wait for the smut to start!! an interesting start...i\'m looking forward to seeing how hermione stops falling for the frenchman and sees the snape we all know and love! :D hope you update soon!
person SnarkySnape
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, i felt stupid when i realized there was another chapter.....but glad too! :D :D i\'d seen sabrina years ago in the theatres, but didn\'t quite remember what happened. suddenly i have the feeling that i ought to go rent it again! good job and keep it up!
person rachel
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story! I love Sabrina, although your story definately makes up for the lack of lust in the movie. Granted it was made in the 50\'s. And if you haven\'t seen that movie, you have to!
Impatiently awaiting the next chapter!
Rachel
person Catherine
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god honey thats wonderful. Dont like this french guy though hes suspicious. Anyway great story...
person Lori
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Oh my God! A house elf named Dorky! \"Master of clean hair, sir.\"

I just love the banter between Lupin and Snape. This is just too good!
person DANIELLE
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LAUGHED SO HARD I ALMOST FELL OFF MY CHAIR. CAN\'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
person Campy Capybara
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Corazon darling,

This is a lovely humourous fic! I like the way you had the essence of Sabrina\'s romantic comedy. I enjoyed the letters in Chapter 1 and the in-sync dinner Severus and Hermione has - that always cracks me up, especially when I saw it done in Two Week\'s notice. I lol at strawberry scented shampoo! *giggles* Can\'t wait to read more!
person EVegvary
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I laughed until I cried! My kids looked at my askance and the cat ran so fast out of the room it bonked into the glass in the french doors. Bravo! You\'ve got a deft hand for this sort of humor - a rousing success. I am looking very forward to your updates!
person Andrian
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMY did you ever fall off the wagon my dear! That was so so erotic and wow! Excellent (though I ashamed to say it, glad you fell lol we will watch out for lighting together)
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*faints* Okay... it is clear here who is the evil one for cliffhangers. I thank the muses that they\'ve visited you again for this wonderful little fiction. I hope all is going smoothly, and that the chapters pour forth easily and updates happen quickly *grins and winks* My only question is this: What is Hermione going ot say to Mort the Frogboy?

Anyway, great chapter!
Karena Elizabeth