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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHA! fabulous! way to go hermione with frogman croaking! fucking fantastic! mmmm...sev and the charms...mmmm!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Girl...I absolutely love your writing. This one was nice. Loved the flow...loved the sex...loved the Ribbits...LOL...another wonderful piece...
RWH
RWH
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can you spell S-M-U-T? sexy and well-written, i loved it! read my story- Scandal At Hogwarts (scanda;) and tell me what you think.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic(as well as all fics of you-I know I`m repeating myself after reviews on FFNet yet I hope you would be rather conent reading my praises about your work once more).While I was reading the chapter including the scene after the explosion in Potions class-you know-Bride of Frankenstein and\"you look lovely today\" I couldn`t help but laughed so loudly(in public internet-cafe!)that the other people were very astonished looking at me(yet I don`t care about)and had tears in my eyes-you are gorgoeus when you have been writing such funny parts of the story-it`s the reason I like your fics so much!Of course-I admire the part of chapter with lemons as well-every time you write smut I read it with great pleasure.And I don`t be upset if Snape and Hermiona were sometimes OOC,all the more when it would be opportunity to make more fun of them.So write more for joy of ypur devoted readers(I belong to them obviously).
Reagards.L.A.
Reagards.L.A.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is getting good....please keep going!!!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just now found your wonderful story and wanted to finish what there was before reviewing.
The first two chappies were great. I love the, \"in lust, no love with him\". It is funny because it is trAnd And the letters between Hermione, Sev, and Dumbly were great. I haven\'t had that much fun reading mail since reading \"Raven Mail\"
And Dorky that is just humerous. I actually fell out of my chair laughing (well not really, but it made you feel good didnt it?).
*trumpets sound* To the third chapter...
*wipes off screen* Nice, very nice. Although I can\'t bee the that Hermoine (after having HOTT SEX with Sev.) told him(Severus) to leave when \"Frogman-man-man-man\" [sorry bout that i couldn\'t resist] knoced on her door. What the...? Shoot, if I just got done having HOTT SEX with Sev. I woult cat care if an angel came to my door and said, \"I will give you immortality, if you just open the door\" I would stay in bed and give him mad cuddles.
Waiting patiently for the next chappie,
Morwen Snape
PS if you are having a hard time reading wI wrI wrote just go through and put your hand over the ()\'s and all shall turn out well. I have a encyency to put it nonsence when I am really worked up. (like right now!!)
The first two chappies were great. I love the, \"in lust, no love with him\". It is funny because it is trAnd And the letters between Hermione, Sev, and Dumbly were great. I haven\'t had that much fun reading mail since reading \"Raven Mail\"
And Dorky that is just humerous. I actually fell out of my chair laughing (well not really, but it made you feel good didnt it?).
*trumpets sound* To the third chapter...
*wipes off screen* Nice, very nice. Although I can\'t bee the that Hermoine (after having HOTT SEX with Sev.) told him(Severus) to leave when \"Frogman-man-man-man\" [sorry bout that i couldn\'t resist] knoced on her door. What the...? Shoot, if I just got done having HOTT SEX with Sev. I woult cat care if an angel came to my door and said, \"I will give you immortality, if you just open the door\" I would stay in bed and give him mad cuddles.
Waiting patiently for the next chappie,
Morwen Snape
PS if you are having a hard time reading wI wrI wrote just go through and put your hand over the ()\'s and all shall turn out well. I have a encyency to put it nonsence when I am really worked up. (like right now!!)
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the line \"Oh my, you washed your hair\" just cracked me up! I really like your writting style and can\'t wait for the next chapters.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must say when the Sabrina challenge was first posted, it didn\'t really appeal, but I do like your response and the originality of the theme.
I love Remus the matchmaker - poor thing just can\'t seem to get Severus to see the whole picture and the, \'you look lovely\', statement at the wrong moment just hightlighted Severus\' ineptitude brilliantly.
I thought the idea of the frog, complete with bulging eyes was a good ploy to focus in on a disturbing character trait and the boys certainly had fun with the potential.
You just need a vindictive Hermione to ask them to mass produce the frog through Weasley\'s Wizard Wheezes, and for pure, unadulterated revenge potential, they could croak - \"I\'m a lousy lay\" repeatedly...just a thought.
The lousy sex was just that...eurgh! poor Hermione...but unless I\'m much mistaken there is hope for her in the not too distant future. ;)
I\'ve not read any of your other fics before. That is a situation I shall remedy shortly.
This is witty, well put together and original. The only thing I can hope for now is well written smut and I rather think you won\'t disappoint there either.
I\'m looking forward to the fireworks. [Evil, wicked grin]
I love Remus the matchmaker - poor thing just can\'t seem to get Severus to see the whole picture and the, \'you look lovely\', statement at the wrong moment just hightlighted Severus\' ineptitude brilliantly.
I thought the idea of the frog, complete with bulging eyes was a good ploy to focus in on a disturbing character trait and the boys certainly had fun with the potential.
You just need a vindictive Hermione to ask them to mass produce the frog through Weasley\'s Wizard Wheezes, and for pure, unadulterated revenge potential, they could croak - \"I\'m a lousy lay\" repeatedly...just a thought.
The lousy sex was just that...eurgh! poor Hermione...but unless I\'m much mistaken there is hope for her in the not too distant future. ;)
I\'ve not read any of your other fics before. That is a situation I shall remedy shortly.
This is witty, well put together and original. The only thing I can hope for now is well written smut and I rather think you won\'t disappoint there either.
I\'m looking forward to the fireworks. [Evil, wicked grin]
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is there more? Please let there be more!...lol..well, if there is more please write it soon!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"Oh my you washed your hair\"
that was so hilarious, a lot of this was hilarious and score one for Severus, the bath and the rose, good job so far, cannot wait for more!
that was so hilarious, a lot of this was hilarious and score one for Severus, the bath and the rose, good job so far, cannot wait for more!