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for What t brt brings

by grace

person nicole
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh do contiune this story. Its very angsty but those are the best kind.
:0)
person Corazon
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your beginning is very captivating. I am interested to see
how you play this out. I have read a few stories that begin
with a rape, but your writing style seem promising. I am
looking forward to the next chapter.

Hugs,
Corazon
person Catherine
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh i like storys like this...please continue...
person trinity
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please continue with this. I\'d like to see where it goes :)
person Cassie
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice start.
person Pippa
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start. It\'ll be very interesting to see how Hermione reacts to her capture and what Snape does. Keep up the good work.
person HPfreak18
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is good so far, continue soon! Make longer chapters so I can enjoy more!!