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by mintmocha

person Pammy
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Screams* THis is so good! Draco\'s tormented thoughts are a nice touch. Even though he\'s a jerk to her, he can\'t help wanting her. I hope this becomes a fight for her...I know who I want to win. *cough, Harry, cough* Good chapter.
person plol
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good pleaontiontinue
person Leslie
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'d have to blo bloody brilliant! This story is so captivating. Please, please don\'t keep me at a cliffhanger.
person HPfreak18
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a really really goos story. I am enjoying it very much. You are an excellent writer and I am looking foward to your next update. When you do update can you please e-mail me at HPfreak18@cs.com. I will be sure to e-mail my draco hermione group and tell them about your story. keep up the excellentk! Hk!
person Pammy
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this story already is addig. Ig. I can feel the sexual tension through the computer screen. All I can do is beg you to have a love triangle with Hermione, Harry and Draco. Harry looks to be hiding some intense feelings for Hermione and Draco...good stuff.
person Jaymee
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excelent.....needs more chapters(lol) but u allready knew that (lol) good so far has A LOT of potential lol
update soon (lol) good job!!!
person Paprika
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is going to be a great story, please update soon.