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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsom start! I love it alrady! As long as Lily is not dateing any guy then i'm cool!
schedule
September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsom start! I love it alrady! As long as Lily is not dateing any guy then i'm cool!
schedule
September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to update now!!! For my sake!! PLEASE!! email me when u did!
schedule
September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to update now!!! For my sake!! PLEASE!! email me when u did!
schedule
September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I can\'t wait to read more, thank you so much for writing! I love how you have yet to give Lily\'s ex-boyfriend\'s name, it adds more mystery - though most would probably guess who it was by now. Enough of my babbling, though. Great job with your story, and thanks for writing!
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it is a cute story. It does need some work though. Grammar is a bit off in places. You have a nice vivid description of Lily. Keep writing!
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. sounds very interesting. I like keep it coming.