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Yah!! I\'ve been waiting and waiting for u to put up a new story ... and now u hand Ind I cant wait til u post again. As usual your writing is superb - its almost as if u live in HP world as u are completely involved in it!. Also think Tonks is an excellent cannon character to pair with Snape - total opposites etc.

Hi back again - Something has been bugging at me since I read this yesterday - was Snape on probation before the incident in the office and his refusal to get Umbridge the Verisatum or did she just put him on probation then because he was being unhelpful? - My brother has nicked off with my book and I cant check so I just thought Id ask.
I also just read the next chapter - which I liked as usual - Book 5 really made me see Snape as more human - tired and not so arrogantly in control as I always saw him - and I think that is reflected in the different way u have written him in this story so far without losing the fact that he is arrogant and very untrusting.

Take this as a compliment: You write very good smut scenes. Seriously, t oft of the ones out there are crude and without substance. Yours are not. While what I would like to see most is a continuation of the Severus/Helena story, I immediately wanted Tonks and Snape to get together after finishing the fifth book. Strange, because they very dissimilar, but love is love and lust is lust, right?

Fabulous start Veresna. Love how you have kept them so well in canon, though it would be nice if the old coot could mellow a bit on the way up the stairs. ;) Tonks is very cool. I would love to see something from Elyse, but next chapter please. Hee hee

Veresna, the beginnings of another masterpiece! You\'ve written them so delightfully in character, I\'d swear you were channeling JKR. Can\'t wait to see what Tonks has in store for the man. Please update soon!

Please hurry up with updating. I want to know what Tonks is about to do with him in room 12.
Maddy

Great fic so far. Tonks is so delightful and canon if I may so. Still, I can\'t wait until they tumble.

Go Tonks! I love a fic with my two fav charcters in it. Like the premise of the story which looks to be very interesting. PLease update soon.

This is great, both in plot and characterization. I can\'t wait to see what Tonks and Snape get up to behind door number 12. Thanks and please update soon

Lovely Veresna! But no surprise there. Can\'t wait to read Chapter 2. You do manage to build the ton qon quite well. Would love to have Elyse draw something from this scenario.