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where is chapter 2?

This is really excellant, I am just wondering if I am missing something?

Tonks\' belly button bob...

*dies laughing*

I have a pierced belly.

Anyhoo - most excellent, as your work never fails to be.

hey, you put this on \'theories, so i came to read it - very, very well done. in charr, fr, fun to read, excellent..... scene..... and overall well written. i\'m glad i read it ^^

All I have to say is damn. That was quite wonderful, and even I have picked up some nocabocabulary thanks to your wonderful descriptive words. I did thoroughly enjoy this and you\'re getting a review that\'s being made at 4:32am in the morning so only have of my intellectual brain is actually working right now, otherwise I\'d go on for a good three pages about what all was awesome, which I may very well do because I just will, though no promises that it will make much of any sense or be spelled right. I do think you portrayed Tonks\' character excellently...is that a word? Well it is now, anyway. I thought that you made her just flighty enough, not too much of a dumb blonde and very good the the crop of short brown hair. You also had Snape\'s snide comments down to a tea. Or is that tee? Oh well, anyway. The one about Rapunzel tickled my fancy, sorry I\'ve got a hair fettish thing. And comparing her bush to cotton candy? That was priceless. So excellent job on all of your hard work and you never did explain just exactly how he became sober again but that\'s ok because it sort of works out physically, four brandy\'s or whatever and then about a half a mug of ale over about four hours, even with no food by the time they actually got around to romping, he was fine. And the boots were sexy. Very sexy, though I don\'t think I\'d let him wear them to fuck me in bed. Maybe if we were doing a slave master thing, or like a professor and a student kinda thing, but not just because we were in a bedroom. And I think that her hair is best when it is long and lavender. Hehe, just my own personal favorite. And that\'s another thing, kudos for remembering to match the carpeting to the drapes, although the drapes weren\'t exactly pastel blue when the carpeting showed up, but that\'s ok too. Again, great job!
~CC

Oh Awesome chapter. I hader rer really thought of that pairing before a few days ago!! Please post anotther chapter soon!!

Another wonderful story! I loved it, they are both written so convincingly. Snape\'s suspicion is very believable, but very amusing too. And I love how you have captured Tonks\' clumsiness.
Only one niggle, and I don\'t suppose it really matters but hey, I\'m an anal Brit, LOL! Snape would not call it \'cotton candy\' but \'candy floss\', and I had to laugh when his boxers were described as knickers, as only ladiear ear knickers, and even then we usually wear briefs! Men wear briefs too, or underpants, but never knickers (unless their name is David Beckham!)

I love all your fics!This one is as wonderfully magnificent as all the previous and I`m really happy that you decided to write the new story once more,all the more I`ve had hopes that some author will choose this ship-Snape and Tonks-because my first thought about Tonks after reading of OOP was such a good character she should be in fanfictions especially in erotic relationships and regarding my Snapeobsession-he is still my favourite male character in any stories and you are the one of the best \"keeper\" of Severus in character without beeing fluffy and OOC,yet bitter,rude and nasty bastard sometimes,however still dead sexy and perfect in bed-what I love in fics most of all.
I`m waiting for more impatiently.

I WAS SO WRONG!!!! I\'m sorry I said this pairing wouldn\'t work...THEY DO! Really cool story! MORE!!!!!!!
I am still waiting for the sequel to SS, lady!
Your writing is amazing! Really....

love always
Frini

Well, I feel rather weird answering a question here, but I can\'t find an e-mail for you. To answer your question, Aquila King, I had purposefully gone back through the book after she makes the remark to him (when he refuses to give her more Veritaserum) before writing it. Although I may be mistaken, I took Umbridge\'s comment that \"You are on probation,\" meant he was already on probation, not that she was putting him there because of the current situation. I guess I the the feeling none of her \'observations\' of the classes left her feeling the teachers were doing an adequate job-even though they weren\'t as close to being sacked as some of the others.

Of course, if I\'m wrong, I also highly doubt that JKR is going to have Snape and Tonks take a tumble in the Leaky Cauldron any time so, so strict adherence to canon isn\'t exactly necessary to enjoy my story!

Veresna Ussep