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by Veresna

person amazingenthusiasto
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best.Snape/Tonks.Ever.

That was absolutely delightful! Playful and fun and sexy and even a tad angsty near the end. Brilliant. I loved it.

person phobos
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw!!!
I LOVE this fic!
Snape and Tonks had never crossed my mind as a couple, but the way you portray them...
And I\'m most curious: who will Snape turn out to be?
You are right, it does screem for another chapter :)
You did a great job, hope you keep it up.
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please! continue it!
person jose
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Veresna, You are the absolute best I have encountered thus far. I like your Snape, he is mean, short tempered but has a sense of humor. And he is forceful and likes his women to beg but only for more of the same. I am sorry you have not finished this story, perhaps you will soon?
You get better with every story you write. The christmas one was superb. The last one: the sexual initiation of Severus Snape was sublime. I could almost see him in that room, studying his subject. It made me laugh and I am not ashamed to say: It made me terribly horny, aroused I should say.
Please please write again? You are the best.

Jose
person Andrea B.
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok.. seriously.. you ought to finish this story...!!!! it\'s going endemoniadamente good.. probably \'cause of the fact of the Tonks/Snape thing, instead of the normal Hr/SS... oh and by the way, i just LOVED \"Don\'t lie to me\" and \"Secretly Slytherin\", i think you made a great character of Helena! (well in case i expressed myself in the wrong way, this is in spanish, so you can translate it if you want to: hiciste de Helena un personaje genial y original por su diversa personalidad...!!!!!
person gx-Silver
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, what a very tasty treat. Hell, I love anything involving Tonks or Snape, and this had both! I say definitely will be anxiously awaiting more hot chapter Do let this story end!
person twisted_lemons
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is one of the oddest and one of the most well written pairings I have ever had the pleasure to write. I have to commend you on your talents at writing for these two. I would have never thought of it. . .but in truth the way you\'ve written it makes it so belivable. Good work hon. If you wouldn\'t mind, I rather admire your ways of protraying Professer Snape. I\'m currently working on a story and would appriciate your help with his characterization. Please e-mail me. I\'d really value your opinion.
person amsev
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a delightfully hot little story. It does indeed beg for a sequel. I\'m really starting to like the NT/SS pairing! I hope you write more soon! Very in-character for both!
person Abra_Appelby
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story was amazing. Both funny and erotic. And your Snape is the most snapeish Snape I\'ve ever read! He\'s better than the original one, who was supposed to be PG13.
A sequel would be a real treat!
person Danielle
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yep, this story practically demands a sequel!! And I for one, will be on the lookout for it!!!!!