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for Beautiful Stranger

by TheLadyFeylene

person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an unusual pairing! and the sexual ion ion is great. So.. Does CHarlie like guys or not? I was a little confused on that point. ANyway - please post a new chapter

Thanks
Karena Elizabeth
person Ky
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it please continue it. This is the first Charliemusemus story I have ever read and I love it
person smoofie
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heres to a forth chapter in two days alright alright i wont be pushy onward ho this is greaaat i really like this
person fizzgig
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review here. PLEASE, PLEASE write more! Okay,not much of a reviet lot lotsof encouragement!
person Jaina
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello.

I really like your story so far!!
And *I* like the pairing ;^p
I can\'t wait to read more, so please keep going!!

Jaina
xxxxxx
person Amadeo
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well are you goign to finish it? Do you even have any plans of finishing it? Because it would be so sad to visit this story all the time with no improvements happening to it whatsoever...
person Glinda Trisstt
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM

This story is showing a lot of promise. I like Charlie\'s flirtatious nature and Remus\' humble one.

Momoremore more !!!!

Glinda
person Guest
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never seen and have never thought of a Remus/Charlie pairing before. I find the idea growing on me. It\'s also an interesting way for Remus to deal with the wolf. I\'d like to see where this goes, keep up the good work.
person LupinsLover
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like how it\'s not all smut. Not that I have any problem with all smut but I like the whole getting to know each other thing. Good chapter. I also like the flirting and I just love Lupin, he\'s so cute and unsure it makes you want to hug him. I think Charlie is good for him. Good job!!
person Mavra
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a very interesting beginning, can\'t wait to see where you go from here