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for Give Her Time

by KarenaEliz

person Sonni
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was definitely a feast for the senses. Rich, lush and totally decadent. This promises to be quite a journey - I haven\'t seen the full itinerary but the sights so far have been amazing.

PS - I can\'t wait to see what you do with the whole chocolate thing. Chocolate body paint anyone?
person Lara
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He lik like your new fic very much though at first I could not imagine the constellation Ginny/Remus. But it rocks! And I love how you made Neville....what a character developpment!*g*. Keep going! Ah yes, and MORE Motorbikes!!!!! *evilgrin*
person Rachelle
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow,

That is a really good story. Keep up the amazing work and please
Add another chapter. Ra
person GrrArrg
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DRUMROLL.......Ladies and Gentlemen, I give you Karena Elizabeth, \"The queen of unresolved sexual tension\" is back by popular demand!!!

Hells Bells mate! That was some chapter!!

I don\'t think we need the actual sex with chapters like that! (only joking, sex please!)

I loved everything about this chapter, From the saucy title to the damn sexy bike ride!!

Best of luck with the new show (not that you need it after how well you did last time!) but thanks again for giving us due warning. You know that we, and I hope I speak for all constant readers will wait as long as is neccessary for the next chapters.

Can\'t wait to see how this story plays out
Much love
GrrArrg
person estrilda
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really nice story and very well written. I am impressed with the unique storyline. Quite creative. I have two questions and one suggestion. Q: Why doesn\'t one of Ginny\'s brothers do something about her slut b****** of a husband? Q: How long do werewolves in your story live? He
person MoD
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay That was one awesome bike ride! I can\'t wait for an update. I need more, much much more! I hope Neville gets a good telling off too!
person Charlie
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*claps*
love it love it! may have to ask the hubby about getting a bike *evil grin*
person Silverose
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If I keep on reading.... IF I KEEP ON READING??? How can you possibly think your Raving Stalkerish Fan would desert you?!? Especially because you are such an amazing writer! Great installment, but I still can\'t wait for the strawberry part ;) I almost had a heart attack because I got an error message when I checked this update, but then I hit reload and it was alright. Good thing, too, I had to pay for this computer, and it would have been in pieces :). Good luck with the show!!! I\'m gonna be waiting for those chapters... *grins* now that you\'ve promised!! Hmmmm..... I think its time I took my boyfriend up on his offer to ride his motorcycle ;) *big silly grin* ahem... ::rushes off:: *bonk* *ow* *not again...*


Hey!!! (just remembered) there is no preview this time!
person BakaChan
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kali is doing good...keep up the most excelent work....
person Krista
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That chapter had me giggling with Ginny and Remus\'s sexual frustration! Bravo!