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for Murky Waters

by ladydeathfaerie

person Pixie
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to drop a line and say I loved it, just like the other one (with Kendra). Should you ever do one of what happened to Lucius after Hermione took him away for \"training,\" I\'d love that too.

Many hugs,

Really enjoyed your stories.

All the best,
Pixie
person Nori
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this one!
I think you\'re a great author, and I sure do love reading about Draco.
Write more chapters please!!

*eagerly waits*
person jeannette
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story,somehow i don\'t think it ended right.will there be another chapter?
person jeannette
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love using my imagination.just imagining lucious malfoy stroking himself,thats enough to make any woman hot.
person Hannah
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was incredible. Yeah... just.... wow. *LOL* Oh well, keep it up, I love it!
person Hannah
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story! I also enjoyed If the Crime Fits the Punishment. Keep up the good work! And if you ever catch that damn monkey, I\'d like a chance at beating him too! I mean really! Stealing your chocolate AND your plot!?!?!? That\'s inexcusable! lol
person Saherah
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that draco will be very shoked about what will happen next lol , i hope she gets oe toe top :) but i trust you judgement on this for it is your story till now i liked it alot hope you make more ....
you won your self a new reader hopfully you will finish the next chapter this few days please.
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PS add some whip or is calling smaking LOL

Saherah
person fanficlurker
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was concerned they would be all sizzle with no spark.Not the case.Illanna does seem to be to bitchy, needs to be careful, he will lose interest in her.To me he needs a sedate woman that helps his ego and does not outsmart him.I want to see her put into her place.She should regret ignoring him. Her character is to strong.I will keep reading,if this is not the end of the story.Curious what will happen.

Why does she not use her title if she likes power?
person black88kat
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SUCH A GOOD FIC! It\'s so well written and everything! I hope that you update soon! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!